Feedback for my idea

1. Only two minutes so opening sequence could be difficult to get across that she is hearing voices
2. Too much for two minutes
3. Idea of finding a dead body could work so I need to watch more opening sequences
4. Watch the opening few minutes of The Killing US Drama on Netflix
5. Watch River and write about about how mental health issues are introduced
6. Watch The Sixth Sense and write about how the dead character is represented
7. Write about Donnie Darko and how mental health and suspense are used
8. Either do a killer finding or supernatural, talking to dead people