Feedback on idea

The audience seemed to like the idea of the star meeting his girlfriend in a cafe and proposing to her on a beach. However, they got confused about the narrative and star image. Additionally, as I am working with a group of boys, I believe that this idea is too "romantic" for them. Having discussed this with the rest of my group, we decided to change the idea to something that we would all be happy to produce. we decided to change the star image to demonstrate a band being more organic. An issue with the location of Southend-on-sea was travelling to the location, whereas with London, it is much easier for us to navigate our way around as we all live there. furthermore, as we have changed it to an indie-rock band, this expands our target audience to a much wider variety or people.