Audience feedback for music video

We played our music video to our class and the class in the year below and received feedback. Overall the feedback was fairly positive but there were some areas to develop. These include the following;
Some of the lip-syncing was out of time and therefore we need to work on this
There were too many shots of the singer with too much head space and so we need to focus more on medium close-ups to develop his star image
It was felt that the narrative was unclear and it was not fully understood as to the role of the rest of the band - they appeared to be meeting up but it was not obvious why
To overcome this obstacle we will focus more on the band footage in the studio as this will create more of a unity between the performance and narrative element
Overall, the feedback was constructive and although we are happy with our first draft, we understand that there are areas where we can improve it and therefore to receive this feedback, it has helped us hone in on those areas that we need to develop and we will focus more on looking at close-up shots of the singer and working upon the link between the performance and narrative