First draft feedback:
From this feedback, it came to our awareness that we had to change the font of our digipak as it was too plain and basic, and this took away the effectiveness from the background picture.
However, from our second draft feedback, we were told that it was clear to them that the genre was a form of rock from the denim jeans that they were wearing and the way in which their hair was styled. Therefore, we were successful in getting this across. Additionally, they said that they would call the band organic due to the way in which they style their hair as long hair on a male is something that is very original and unconventional. However, they did mention that a way in which we could improve was by having the full name on the spine of the digipak, instead of just having the abbreviation of their name as they are a new band and people may not know what "TYP" is or stands for. Therefore, we shall be putting these criticisms forward and altering them so that our digipak is the best that it can be.
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